PowerRangerYELLOW's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Obama's Inauguration]

You guys are gonna hate me for this but

It plays out like a long drawn out conversation and this type of humor just doesn't cut for me.

Make your animation move a little bit more and give your characters comical expressions at the right times.

Talking over drab, motionless animation with uninteresting drawings is basically gonna drag the quality of your movie down even if there is some true humor in there.

Since the characters are mostly standing still anyways try not to use tweens for the arms at all.

If there not walking and just standing there. You might as well do a few subtle frame by frame animation.

Look at real life when people stand motionless there is some subtle movement such as when they take breaths.

save tweens for camera effects such as close ups and pans.

The way you do caricature is a good start since we know who the characters are such as obama is obama, the fat women is the fat women and ect.

Satire is not your strong point at all especially political satire since political satire needs to be shocking.

You need to express a view point that might not fit into the mainstream of the public and in some cases take the risk in being despised for your views.

But because it is new and shocking.

Sometimes you might even change minds but political satire doesn't work when you play it safe.

Just look at how boring those bush is dumb jokes are since everyone agrees anyways.

Do all this and your next movie will be a more effective satire and even more successful than the movie you already made.

Good luck to your future attempts at political satire.

-PowerRangerYELLOW

[GKG review: DB the movie]

I barely even like dragonball and i agree

The dragonball movie looks like it's gonna suck because they spent all this money to make another typical hollywood comic book movie that didn't even read the comic.

The only thing remarkable about is that it's based off of dragonball and don't even bother staying true it's source matteral.

Which is something you never do in making adaption of existing matteral.

They would have been better off doing something original since they wasted so much creative energy to make a movie the dragonball fans don't want to see.

It would have been better off as a low budget movie made by some fanboy because at least than it would be of higher quality.

Send a message to hollywood by not watching the dragonball movie.

They'll learn that what we all really want is substance over style not the other way around.

-PowerRangerYELLOW

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

Yeah, I like the old Chinese version better. it was so true to the cannon.

[Aristocrat Joke]

The best aristocrate joke ever

To those who don't get it. The whole movie is a parody of the often offensive aristocrate joke.

It ussually contains elements of shock vaule of somekind to provoke laughter but this is different because it was building up to a truely surprizing punch line.

The aristocrate joke works because you can tell it different ways and it still ends up being funny.

There is no right or wrong way to tell it.

The fact it was told clean makes it all the more funny and shocking all over again since your not expecting it.

[Luis vs. Ninja Turtle]

Kinda neat

But raphahel wouldn't let himself get bitched around by that little mexican luis or any of the ninja turtles for that matter.

If this was based on reality than that ninja turtle would have sliced luis into taco sushi.

-PowerRangerYELLOW

[The Truth Is]

no offence or anything but that was too over long

This could have easily been drawn or even traced instead of using the actual images from evagellion.

while i would have still thought the movie is stupid i would been more likely to leave you alone.

You can also edit submissions like this to only include your funniest bits since this will make it a whole lot more watchable.

heck, i would have preferred to watch another phonex wrong movie over this and i hate those with a passion.

if you do your own drawings and i do mean your own drawings don't just copy the anime.

the best you can just caricature the anime in your own drawing style just because it looks more interesting and even change up the animation lip synching on gendo on every new gag.

gendo can even have different expressions, gestures and act out the existing audio from somewhere else.

this does this will add another layer of comedy that people will really get a kick out of and people who hate your movie also appreciate these subtle things added that would otherwise seem unneeded but extra layers of entertainment is never unneeded since your goal is to do the impossible and entertainment everyone.

it can't be done but theres no reason you can't try and try harder it may burn you out but don't force it and have fun.

a truly funny flash has not only witty audio but also witty drawings.

do all this and you will truly stand out above your competition. you got a front page and a lot of good feedback and this gives a boost to your confidence.

don't let your fans boost your ego too much or you'll only become arrogant and have less desire to learn.

you can all mark this review unhelpful just because your a fanboy to this movie but if a version of this came out with the advice i gave taken you would like it more and be impressed by the improvements.

and jizz over that even more.

-PowerRangerYELLOW

[GlockGroup TT #5]

This is awesome

and the one by penor is the best one. meg griffin tottaly gets whats cumming to her :P

[Seiranger Opening]

nice attempt

not bad for a fan made intro and i take it you were trying to create your own fan made super sentai series.

one thing i have to bitch about is that your pencil stokes have some sloppiness to it.

You can easily clean that up by using the arrow tool to straighten and smooth out some of those edges.

and nice use of line of action when the heros are fighting but when the one bad guy gets kicked in the nuts and than disappears.

have the kick actually life the guy higher off the ground so it'll look a whole lot more painful.

good luck with your future projects.

[Stop Your Shitty Posting]

The people have spoken

and we want cannbis unbanned from the clock crew. bigs was seriously being a jackass seriously.

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

lol we cool now but he's still a fagit!1!1

[Christian Quotes]

Praise jesus

Your movie made me see the light and now the light. Can i get an amen my brothers?

-PowerRangerYELLOW

[Never Touch Children]

I learned something new today

Touching kids is wrong even if it's only in a platonic non sexual way. Next time a kid wants you to touch them just use your trusty stun gun on em.

Thanks for the tip. You always give great advice.

peace and love to strange clock.

-PowerRangerYELLOW