You almost got a good satire here
Thats an actual pretty good satirical attack of the slap dash production of pico's school and i know plenty of people will click this review as useless but pay attention to pico's school and this movie.
It points out the flaws of the games narrative in general.
I think awesomebine would have been a better title for this movie because while you are spoofing both pico's school and egoraptor's humor styling.
Pico's school is a very much a columbine inspired game and the fact it was released on the same year as the columbine high school massacre.
Hell, i got in trouble at school for playing pico's school on the computer but it was only a brief lecture that while the game is a harmless distraction it might not be socially appropriate to play at school.
This in general is an alright spoof of ego's work but nothing that i would consider to be the parody it could have been.
Ego's work in general with the exception of girl chan is hyper as hell and confusing.
I would have made fun of that such as making the pace somewhat faster because i while i hate ego's work it oddly works because it ends in a blur leaving you room with only two reactions.
Hey this is funny or hey that sucked dicks.
General ivan's voice acting was very comical stuff and i liked how he did all the voices because everyone of them fitted the characters.
His emotions in the voices were way above average and he didn't really underact nor did he do any real overacting rather he overacted when appropriate because the movie itself overacted.
This shows signs of a great actor at work and i hope to see more animators asking him for help rather than the same actors everyone else uses due to there popularity.
Most voice actors on newgrounds tend to do the same voice for there characters because they can only do there natural voice and can barely act.
a tip for any would be voice actors reading this review.
Remember to always try on a new voice before taking on a new roll because you don't want too many characters you voice to sound alike.
In short you picked a good voice acting to work with and your doing a good thing by asking a voice actor who doesn't appear to be plastered all over other movies within the portal.
We as a viewing public while like seeing actors we like do other work we also give more of a fuck over an actor's performance over the animator using said voice actor's celebrity status.
This was a dead on parody of pico's school but the satirical attack on egoraptor's work could have been a little better because you left some aspects of his shit unspoofed.
As i said egoraptor's metal gear awesome, mario awesome and epically awesome gaiden end in a confusing blur leaving you room for only two reactions.
That was funny or that sucked dicks.
The fact that this didn't end in a even more confusing blur and left room for inbetween reactions renders this as an imperfect spoof to ego's humor stylings.
-PowerRangerYELLOW